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Evaluation - Renisa Kanadi

• Is it fit for purpose? Explain why.
  I think that Lee Kennedy's work is defiantly fit for purpose. His use of words and images ensure that the ideals of how to get the perfect golf swing and understood to an indefinite manner. To add to this, his use of animation within the movie also add to effect and add a greater sense of understanding than I initially thought. 
  
   Are the media elements appropriate? Give reasons.
  I find all the media elements to be of a good standard and appropriate for the movie Lee has made. The way that he has used images along with his video are to the finest standard. 
  Does it work without errors or broken links? Screenshot any problems.
  There are no issues with Lee's movie. 
  Is it professional? Explain why.
  The movie is very professional. The font is befitting and uses the images to it's advantage, ensuring for a professional look and feel. 
  
  Give at least 5 amendments you think the designer should make.
  -Use correct grammar and spelling
  -Increase the size of the opening text
  -Add sound
  -Use animation
  -Use high quality images
  
  Renisa Kanadia

Screenshots of my movie

P2 - original

M1 (changes made to P2)

P3

When pieces of media are created, it is imperative that design laws are abided with and kept between. These laws include copyright and plagiarism. Plagiarism is where a piece of existing work has been copied without the permission of its creator or owner. Copyright would give the needed permission to the person wishing to use it from the works original owner.

In my guide, I have used multiple pictures from Google images. The images have been given to Google for the use of the general public. These images have originally come from other websites that have again given Google the permission to source them for use. However, I have sourced them below as they are not my property so I must show where I have used the images from.
https://www.google.co.uk/search?q=titleist&safe=strict&biw=1440&bih=799&source=lnms&tbm=isch&sa=X&ei=LbwCVYijBYHW7Qat6IHwAg&ved=0CAYQ_AUoAQ&dpr=1#safe=strict&tbm=isch&q=golf+swing

I have used a chunk of text from (www.wikihow.com › ... › Golf › Golf Swing Instructions) in order to put into words the types of golf swing that are typically used. Because the information is in Wikipedia, I do not have to ask for permission to use it.

I also used pictures from the Titleist website (the golf ball). http://www.titleist.co.uk/ .I used this because it is relevant to the information that I have on screen and it is relevant to my work and I have sourced where I have used the picture from as it is not my image. Also, as I am using the image for educational purposes and will not make any financial gain from it, I do not need to seek the owner’s permission for use.

Storyboard

M1

I have added buttons onto each slide that would allow the user to switch between them. I have changed the font in the last slide to make it more understandable. Also, when changing slides i am going to add some form of sound effect. 

P1

D2 corrections!

P7

Screenshots as evidence for database